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[TooF 1300]

Oh... this is back? I didn't notice.

GRAPHICS: Alright, I know some people are just naturally more artistically talented than others, but that doesn't mean you can't improve on what you have here. I'm not saying everyone can be an Adam Phillips or a James Farr. I'm just saying that if you actually try and practice... you inevitably WILL get better. I realize that they are TeeF in a mouth. They don't have any limbs. But you could try drawing more custom eye and mouth shapes instead of using the same generic ones over and over. Or SOMETHING to not make everything look so static and bland.

HUMOR:
This is where you have the chance to save yourself if you're not stellar in the graphics department. However... I didn't think it was that funny... at all. I think this series would be SO much better if it actually had jokes that related to them being TeeF in a mouth. What happens when the guy eats? Chews gum? Goes to the dentist? Something I've always wondered is... who's mouth are they even IN? You should definitely make him a character, and the things he does could effect what happens to the TeeF, and vice versa. That would be sweet!

The idea has so much potential I don't know why you waste it by setting your sights so low.

I also noticed you got rid of the commentaries. Personally, I thought those were the funniest part.

MACception responds:

I understand your points. And I have practiced getting better artistically, but you have to decide when "Style" is hindered by senselessly improving some visuals. Right now I think the only thing I can improve on is backgrounds...I mean, honestly dude, how good can you make a tooth look? or eyes or a mouth? Maybe a tad bit better, but nothing incredible.

About the mouth related jokes, they wont see the mouth again for a while most likely, so until I do another regular TooF episode and not the 1300 series, I wont even have the opportunity for that.

Though, mouth related jokes are so expected...that's why I haven't done them :)

Commentaries are now on my site instead of included in the animation. It keeps file sizes down.

Thanks for the honest review bro.

[Meat Grinder]

Awesome as usual.

You weren't lying when you mentioned this one would be dark. The whole thing felt like some kind of post-apocalyptic horror movie. (And the nose scene was nuts!) But it was great. I watched it like 5 times already. Why is it your animations just seem to get BETTER the more times you watch them instead of getting old?

I absolutely love the way you animate mechanical arms and mechanical things in general. I really hope you get a Cintiq one day. Too bad those things cost like 80 bazillion googolplex dollars.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

indeed.
although recently I stumbled across a flash comedy animation festival.

the top prize is 25,000 dollars.
cintiq's only cost 3000.
of the things I could do with that money.
just gotta make something funny to enter into the contest.

[Farkle!]

Awesome!

THANK you for making a flash that was begging to be made!

The graphics were pretty simple but I loved the old infomercial feel. Now do Farkle: New and Improved!

XxwaSSupxX responds:

Oo you read my mine. I a=was actually planning on eventually just doing that one and Farkle!!

[(FAKTORY)]

Fiven!

That was awesome! Your animations are always fun. I love that song too.

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[Weasel Stomping Day]

Oh yes...

That was a hilarious awesomely made cartoon my friend.

It made me laugh as much as the video on the actual album. XD

Starogre responds:

good :)

[An cart00n]

Oh my...

Was that you in the picture on the wall? XD

Piclownjews responds:

yis

[Fiberglass Monkey]

Fiberglass monkeys are nightmarish thingie-ma-bobs

Yay! I love it when Lemon Demon songs get made into animations. I would also like to express that I think TmsT is a way better animator than AltF4, even though he got to do the cooler songs... (Ultimate Showdown.)

Anyway, what's your obsession with that crazy go-go dance you have someone doing in all your animations? You know what I'm talking about... the one where they have their fists extended and look like they're doing the hula or something.

TmsT responds:

It started with the Angel of Death and sorta became a signature of mine thereafter...

[Tribute: Jesus Christ]

Umm...

That was pretty dumb. I mean, I can appreciate intellegent religious satire like "Peter Godly." But this was just a pointless thoughtless waste of time, made soley to bash religion.

cyberen responds:

NO ITS A TRIBUTE, LOOK AT THE TITLE!

[Rehashed-fwl]

Hmm...

It's kind of cool what you did here, even if it is just a bunch of randomly moving lines.

Legend responds:

thanks. The lines are strangely hypnotizing.

[Your Horoscope for Today!]

Sweet!

This goes to my favorites. :)

Hilarious song, and the animation kept up nicely with the fast-pacedness of the it. Good job.

I'm actually working on one for "Albuquerque" right now.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Huzzah!
That song is a masterpeice!