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[Rhyming Words]

LMAO!

That was hilarious. I haven't laughed like that at a flash for a while.

Most of the humor of course came from that awesome Sesame Street clip and not the animation but what the heck I don't feel like being a flash snob today. 8/10.

Lord-Sonx responds:

animation+ music = funny
music = nice
animation = nice

need both to complete the movie ;)

[1 - The Story of Khale]

Whoa neat.

Wait a second... episode 1/42? This is gonna be a really long series. Can't wait to see what becomes of it... looks like it's gonna be great. :D

I just love the backgrounds in this. They really create a sense of atmosphere but are still kind of cartoony in a way.

[My GOD, Robots! Episode 5]

Very cool.

There's no question about the fact that your style has greatly improved, but even this was quite enjoyable. I loved the thing you had in there about the 'universe' of the cartoon being inside your computer. XD

It's great to see you're submitting your stuff to NG because this place is in desperate need of more originality. Godspeed!

[Monster Dance Party]

OMG Pen Ward

I loved your Adventure Time cartoon dude. :D

As for this cartoon it was also very amusing, even though it was short. Can't wait to see what you're cooking up next.

[Flip top boxers]

Stolen?

Unless you're Shmorky, (which I don't believe you are), this is not your work.

Shame shame.

[TooF 1300]

Oh... this is back? I didn't notice.

GRAPHICS: Alright, I know some people are just naturally more artistically talented than others, but that doesn't mean you can't improve on what you have here. I'm not saying everyone can be an Adam Phillips or a James Farr. I'm just saying that if you actually try and practice... you inevitably WILL get better. I realize that they are TeeF in a mouth. They don't have any limbs. But you could try drawing more custom eye and mouth shapes instead of using the same generic ones over and over. Or SOMETHING to not make everything look so static and bland.

HUMOR:
This is where you have the chance to save yourself if you're not stellar in the graphics department. However... I didn't think it was that funny... at all. I think this series would be SO much better if it actually had jokes that related to them being TeeF in a mouth. What happens when the guy eats? Chews gum? Goes to the dentist? Something I've always wondered is... who's mouth are they even IN? You should definitely make him a character, and the things he does could effect what happens to the TeeF, and vice versa. That would be sweet!

The idea has so much potential I don't know why you waste it by setting your sights so low.

I also noticed you got rid of the commentaries. Personally, I thought those were the funniest part.

MACception responds:

I understand your points. And I have practiced getting better artistically, but you have to decide when "Style" is hindered by senselessly improving some visuals. Right now I think the only thing I can improve on is backgrounds...I mean, honestly dude, how good can you make a tooth look? or eyes or a mouth? Maybe a tad bit better, but nothing incredible.

About the mouth related jokes, they wont see the mouth again for a while most likely, so until I do another regular TooF episode and not the 1300 series, I wont even have the opportunity for that.

Though, mouth related jokes are so expected...that's why I haven't done them :)

Commentaries are now on my site instead of included in the animation. It keeps file sizes down.

Thanks for the honest review bro.

[Throwback the Duck Ep. 1A]

Zzzzzzz.

Alright, let's start out with one of the good things first. The drawings and art itself were really great, and the animator obviously has a lot of talent in that category. Still, although everything is pretty to look at, the whole flash is completely devoid of any personality. This was honestly one of the blandest animations I've ever seen.

Maybe the story does need work, but that's not the main thing I feel is bringing this series down. The characters themselves just have nothing likable about them, they are just so empty and lifeless. No emotion in the facial expressions, and the voice acting was also quite bad.

The best part was definitely the backgrounds, which were awesome. I found it much more entertaining just to stare at them then pay attention to whatever was going on.

[Eres Veneno ++]

Vinnie's Back!

I gotta say I was really excited to see your name in the portal again, and this didn't disappoint. Of course it was overflowing with style, and no one can animate chaotic crowd scenes with more flair and personality than you. Fantastic video. Keep up the great work!

[(2007) Stomach Ache]

Haha nice.

Although some parts moved kind of slowly, this made me laugh numerous times.

- *Accidently slices guy in half... pauses*
- That'll be $500.

^Best part. XD

[Accidental Emperor Ep:2]

God I love you guys.

This cartoon is truly a mastery masterpeice. Maybe I'm just retarded or something, but I found it to be freaking hilarious. Twisted too, but everything about it oozes with style in a demented messed up way. Please continue to entertain us with your hilariously kooky drawings and outrageous sense of humor.

I can't wait for the third.

I'm also mad about poop.